oil: colour revised

yea i like this photo and think it has potential which is why i came here after the thumbcritique...

okay so u used fabric. maybe the shift from the lips to the mouth should be somehow softer...like, show just a tiny bit more, teeth for example. but that wouldve required u to not use the fabric. hmm. i dunno, its just unrealistic now cos i feel i should see more. i realize some fantasy or horror effects are not realistic, but to find the balance....

also, what i said about the face just being 'lastered' there on the black bg, i mean that maybe her neck could continue just a bit further, shoulders starting...maybe have veings showing on the neck... the bare face in the dark just seems weird. in movies is works though. i think its because of the stark contrast, her face and hair are so light (well lit) that its funny for the bg to be all black, u know? the darkness shuld creep up on the face, to the hair, by making shadows. the difference is just too blatant.

also the hair looks liek u spent 10minutes with gel and mirror... altho it might be coincidence.

alritgh that was long. just wanted to help

kep it up