I like the colour so much more

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Awesome pose, you can see fear in her eyes!

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oh, love the expression !

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yea i like this photo and think it has potential which is why i came here after the thumbcritique...

okay so u used fabric. maybe the shift from the lips to the mouth should be somehow softer...like, show just a tiny bit more, teeth for example. but that wouldve required u to not use the fabric. hmm. i dunno, its just unrealistic now cos i feel i should see more. i realize some fantasy or horror effects are not realistic, but to find the balance....

also, what i said about the face just being 'lastered' there on the black bg, i mean that maybe her neck could continue just a bit further, shoulders starting...maybe have veings showing on the neck... the bare face in the dark just seems weird. in movies is works though. i think its because of the stark contrast, her face and hair are so light (well lit) that its funny for the bg to be all black, u know? the darkness shuld creep up on the face, to the hair, by making shadows. the difference is just too blatant.

also the hair looks liek u spent 10minutes with gel and mirror... altho it might be coincidence.

alritgh that was long. just wanted to help

kep it up

The mouth and background looks like that intentionally, to emphasise something empty inside and around the person. I also dont think the black inside the mouth looks to weird against the lips, the upper lip is shadowed so it looks a bit better than if I were to just have cut out the inside of the mouth. I realise it looks unrealistic, its meant to.

I can agree that the shadowing could've been a lot better, that the darkness could creep up on the face more.

What if I spent 10 minutes with the hair? That shouldnt matter. Actually I think I spent less, it turned out like I wanted at that moment and that was all I needed. How would you wanted the hair to look like?


Thanks for the critique, I think this is the first comment i've ever gotten that has real and creative critique in it.



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Now that I look at this, and the b&w version as well, I think the hair would look really cool with a back-lick. To make it seem a bit more... oily and dark.

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